My peers helped me focus my ideas and clear my mind of all useless details that I was worried about.  I was mostly worried about how to format the essay and where to talk about certain subjects.  My focus of the essay is to analyze the effects of media throughout my life.  Specifically, the loss of innocence that occurred over time.  Each form of media had a similar effect and they all coincided with each other to create a super-mass media that changed my life.  This peer editing helped me organize the theme of the essay and the actual focus of where I want the essay to go.