I really liked my comments. Most of the essay was highlighted which is a little bit of a confidence boost.  The general comments were to make sure that there is a focus of the essay and to maybe put the focus towards the beginning of the essay and use the examples that I wrote about as evidence from the text.  I wrote the first three pages with so much ease and I expect that the rest of the essay will flow easily as well. I think that I am actually enjoying writing this essay because it is about something that I actually enjoy talking about and reading about.